That is a few people looking for an android release for this. Next build I do ill make a note to do this [would be 2.0 as 1.2 is already built and distributed on patreon] but it is coming soon!
WS is on the list of things to be added, going to be a very complicated to integrate but should be a fun challenge. Also yes every kink can be toggled on/off on the Player Configuration screen!
Version 1.2 is planned to be released once I pump out 2.0 on Patreon, 2.0 is a pretty huge update so I was planning on releasing the next version in March if things go well.
Wow O///O this reeaally has so much potential! ^^_ It's great as is, don't get me wrong, but maaan xou've really set a great base to make way for all the kinky things I bet xou have planed ;) nice addition to the VN world, for sure~ UwU I can practically see all the furries flooding in and asking for cum bowls and tail plugs~ :p I can't wait to see how xou develop this down the line~! Very hot! >_</
Oh heck thank you so much! I'm super glad the support has been so overwhelming for this little pet project I decided to toss on here. The future holds a good chunk more doms with their own dialog/personality, and we have tons of feedback on what kinks people want to see! If you have any ideas of your own feel free to put them in that google form feedback link above!
Oh thank you so much! The 'im close' button really just advances the text the same way clicking would, we just didnt want people to think the only option was the 'i came' button, which launches a big ol punishment session.
We can look into some alternatives to that though that is great feedback 8D
Also as stated in a reply a headspace its like getting into a mindset / character.
There will be an update a little later this month! 1.1 contains a new kink, like 4x the dialog to help with repetition, and some other fun stuff.
Custom limit will lower / raise the difficulty of the game overall, individual kink limits are coming in 1.2 so look for that next month [we just finished that so need to test it and all that fun stuff]
Oh thank you so much! Just took a peek~ I addressed a lot of the repetitiveness of the random dialog [adding 4x more options per kink, as well as added some precautions to not repeat the same line / kink twice in a row] so that should help a lot.
As for a storyline that might be a bit difficult with it being randomly generated >w> but I will try and keep the context more situated as if you were on a webcam site in the future.
Why limit the story to simulate a webcam-site? Is it so the user can pretend to be part of the story more easily?
Currently it's a bit difficult to understand how the dom can manipulate the gag / how he can use the glove over an online connection.
I feel like keeping to a webcam-experience only will be a very difficult limit for you to work around. Id suggest you scrap that limitation. If you don't want to scrap the webcam-idea, you could use other workarounds like sci-fi style VR, or magic as an explanation for how things happen I guess.
A randomly generated story is also difficult to work around, if you don't introduce more game mechanics / goals to guide the player.
Yup this wasn't really meant to be a story per say more like an edgemeplease style game but with visuals and alternate kinks. I totally get what you are putting down though I will have to think on some ways to make it a bit more immersive and cohesive that this is all taking place over a webcam/chat.
Its a shame itch.io doesnt have private messaging as far as I can see, spamming my feedback in the comment sections feels wrong :). But you can't really respond to the google feedback form. I don't know if FA or discord or something is a better forum for discussion-style feedback.
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The game certainly has the foundations for developing into an interesting edgemeplease style game. If you want to lean even more in that direction I have some suggestions:
- Make the premise more clear. Describe that the game is a 'follow along' style game in the description. It might also be good to describe / make more clear in-game (Such as having the dom actually explain when the user asks in the beginning). Although this could be improved with UI changes rather than text descriptions.
- Put the activities on timers. I'm guessing you've seen the edgemeplease .com website & its timers. Having the game auto-progress would be good, currently you need to interrupt your activities to progress the textboxes. Id suggest adding game-speed preferences like edgemeplease in your preference menu.
- tweak the instructions. You might have already done this in 1.1? I dont know. For example, It's unclear what '12 edges' mean. 'Quick strokes' or similar would be simpler to understand.
- Tweak the numbers. 100s of ball-slaps is a -lot-.
'Story / interaction' suggestion:
- The ways a dom can interact through a webcam is very limited. You could add more variety by having the dom have other subs already at his place, and involving them in the instructions. For example, imagine the dom has a pup, and you have to succeed in his challenge for the pup to be unlocked, so you have to cooperate. Or the pup is doing the same challenge, and you're competing, and only the 'winner' gets rewarded.
...Oh, yeah, it definitely was not clear at all that this was supposed to be over webcam. I thought it was just that Bruce personally is not a hands-on type of dom.
In this current version yes. There might be an update down the line that allows for vibrators / caged edging but for now it was omitted since the dialog would be different between caged and uncaged.
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Would it be possible to make it compatible with the itch.io pc app?
It used to be, before the latest release. Last I checked, author wasn't sure what went wrong and was looking into it.
Can u add an Android ver. Pls T_T
Looking to have that released with 1.2!
yay!
can u play it on android 👀?
I will be uploading the android package along side 1.2 once that comes down the pipeline!
Is sounding or urethral play in the kinks list?
It is in the options of kinks to implement yes! Just a manner of getting around to coding it in.
Thank you!
Could you make this playable on android?it's the only GOOD device I have to play this on
That is a few people looking for an android release for this. Next build I do ill make a note to do this [would be 2.0 as 1.2 is already built and distributed on patreon] but it is coming soon!
Could be here at least piss watersports fetish
same here but have it be totally avoidable as it isn't everybody's kinda thing to be fair
there should be way to skip this fetish via preference
WS is on the list of things to be added, going to be a very complicated to integrate but should be a fun challenge.
Also yes every kink can be toggled on/off on the Player Configuration screen!
Yup Yup! All kinks can be toggled on or off on the Player Config screen!
Fav, fav, fav, fav... This game is already my favorite... Fav, fav, fav, fav...
Thank you so much 8D! Glad you like it I hope future updates are up your alley as well!
hello, I want to ask you if a new version will be released soon, give an answer if you can
Version 1.2 is planned to be released once I pump out 2.0 on Patreon, 2.0 is a pretty huge update so I was planning on releasing the next version in March if things go well.
The 1.1 release isn't available on the app.
That is very strange, I replaced the zip with 1.1 on here I will look into how to update that properly Thanks for letting me know.
is there a social media account like twitter where I can follow you and be up to date?
I don't really have a twitter devoted to this game I probably should make one though.
will there be an android version? i absolutely love this!
Oh shoot I totally forgot to do an android version for this and 1.2 I will try and remember for future releases!
just curious, is there gonna be female characters?
There was not a plan to have any female doms at least in the near future but perhaps someday.
Wow O///O this reeaally has so much potential! ^^_ It's great as is, don't get me wrong, but maaan xou've really set a great base to make way for all the kinky things I bet xou have planed ;) nice addition to the VN world, for sure~ UwU I can practically see all the furries flooding in and asking for cum bowls and tail plugs~ :p I can't wait to see how xou develop this down the line~! Very hot! >_</
Oh heck thank you so much! I'm super glad the support has been so overwhelming for this little pet project I decided to toss on here. The future holds a good chunk more doms with their own dialog/personality, and we have tons of feedback on what kinks people want to see! If you have any ideas of your own feel free to put them in that google form feedback link above!
hi! i just discovered your game >w<
could you please add furry in the tag so that many people could discover this game?
Oh! of course! if there are any other tags you think might fit let me know I can add them as well!
since its a m/m you can add "gay" tag >w<
You got it! Thanks so much!
Really nice, I let some feedback in the google form if you want to see it.
Ps: what does it means when it says ´´sink deeper into that headspace´´?
Shift gradually into a certain mentatity/ persona.
Like getting into charater
Oh thank you so much! The 'im close' button really just advances the text the same way clicking would, we just didnt want people to think the only option was the 'i came' button, which launches a big ol punishment session.
We can look into some alternatives to that though that is great feedback 8D
Also as stated in a reply a headspace its like getting into a mindset / character.
Really nice game! When will be the next update?
One question: what does the custom limit do?
There will be an update a little later this month! 1.1 contains a new kink, like 4x the dialog to help with repetition, and some other fun stuff.
Custom limit will lower / raise the difficulty of the game overall, individual kink limits are coming in 1.2 so look for that next month [we just finished that so need to test it and all that fun stuff]
Such a good game, busted my balls this morning sore and shot a huge load, theyre still a little sore. thank you :)
Haha! Now that's a raving review! Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Nice game, good start, left some feedback in the google form :)
Oh thank you so much! Just took a peek~
I addressed a lot of the repetitiveness of the random dialog [adding 4x more options per kink, as well as added some precautions to not repeat the same line / kink twice in a row] so that should help a lot.
As for a storyline that might be a bit difficult with it being randomly generated >w> but I will try and keep the context more situated as if you were on a webcam site in the future.
All super good feedback thank you so much!
Why limit the story to simulate a webcam-site? Is it so the user can pretend to be part of the story more easily?
Currently it's a bit difficult to understand how the dom can manipulate the gag / how he can use the glove over an online connection.
I feel like keeping to a webcam-experience only will be a very difficult limit for you to work around. Id suggest you scrap that limitation. If you don't want to scrap the webcam-idea, you could use other workarounds like sci-fi style VR, or magic as an explanation for how things happen I guess.
A randomly generated story is also difficult to work around, if you don't introduce more game mechanics / goals to guide the player.
Yup this wasn't really meant to be a story per say more like an edgemeplease style game but with visuals and alternate kinks.
I totally get what you are putting down though I will have to think on some ways to make it a bit more immersive and cohesive that this is all taking place over a webcam/chat.
Its a shame itch.io doesnt have private messaging as far as I can see, spamming my feedback in the comment sections feels wrong :). But you can't really respond to the google feedback form. I don't know if FA or discord or something is a better forum for discussion-style feedback.
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The game certainly has the foundations for developing into an interesting edgemeplease style game. If you want to lean even more in that direction I have some suggestions:
- Make the premise more clear. Describe that the game is a 'follow along' style game in the description. It might also be good to describe / make more clear in-game (Such as having the dom actually explain when the user asks in the beginning). Although this could be improved with UI changes rather than text descriptions.
- Put the activities on timers. I'm guessing you've seen the edgemeplease .com website & its timers. Having the game auto-progress would be good, currently you need to interrupt your activities to progress the textboxes. Id suggest adding game-speed preferences like edgemeplease in your preference menu.
- tweak the instructions. You might have already done this in 1.1? I dont know. For example, It's unclear what '12 edges' mean. 'Quick strokes' or similar would be simpler to understand.
- Tweak the numbers. 100s of ball-slaps is a -lot-.
'Story / interaction' suggestion:
- The ways a dom can interact through a webcam is very limited. You could add more variety by having the dom have other subs already at his place, and involving them in the instructions. For example, imagine the dom has a pup, and you have to succeed in his challenge for the pup to be unlocked, so you have to cooperate. Or the pup is doing the same challenge, and you're competing, and only the 'winner' gets rewarded.
...Oh, yeah, it definitely was not clear at all that this was supposed to be over webcam. I thought it was just that Bruce personally is not a hands-on type of dom.
Frist or later you can make a version for android ?
I suppose that could be an option for future releases! I didn't think there was a market for it haha.
Wait, why does chastity disable edging? It's definitely possible to edge someone who's in chastity.
In this current version yes. There might be an update down the line that allows for vibrators / caged edging but for now it was omitted since the dialog would be different between caged and uncaged.